This one seems deeper than dark but none the less enjoyable

great flow

Great job. This one sort of had my mind wondering. I was trying to figure out the 'plot' of the poem. Is it talking about heartbreak? Hmmm. Anyway. Amazing write. I love when I read dark poems and it gets me thinking. I went back and read it a second time just to let it sink in. Overall, great format. 5/5