Its very sad...
but i rlly like it:]
i can actually feel wat the girl in the poem is feeling....its rlly well written:]
you're doing rlly good so far:)
cant wait 'till u finish it(:
5/5

I love the end of this stanza. I think you are writing this really good so far. Just think of him and how it hurts and I'm sure more great stanzas and lines will come out, maybe a few tears too, but thats okay. Sometimes its okay to hurt, I'm sure it'll all be good for you soon. You seem like a really strong person, you can make it. I'm going through something similar. Keep up the good work, I'll be checking out your poems.
<3,
Em

Short but filled with emotion, i wanted to read more. Enjoyed reading what you had though. (: Keep it up. 5/5