I Love You

by Jay Perry Jr   Dec 17, 2009


I look into your eyes and see

Love can truly come to be
Over the rising sun
Voices whispers you're the one
Eternity sitting in our hands

Yielding to this new romance
Our love will fill the emptiness inside
Until the end of time

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  • 14 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    This was awkward to me. I didn't know where you were going with it and it seemed choppy. I understand the concept, you just did a poor job of doing it. I'd make it a little longer so that your feelings are expressed more, because your diction didn't do your emotions justice. Keep working at it. Nik

  • 14 years ago

    by Loved In Hell

    You said a lot in a very little amount very nicely done 5/5

    -laura

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