I really love this poem. I was like that, and i messed it up, but now that he is back in my life he has to be the one to brake it... But really this is an amazing poem.
5/5

I loved this piece girl!

...gasp for breath in sync
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This expression is breathtaking, love love it!

There's a barbed wire fence he has around his heart
I want to get in, but I don't know where or how to start
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And I loved how you meant to show how his heart is protected with his guard/walls up instead of using the usual cliche words. 5/5! Awesome write (: