Angels

by Niveus Nox   Dec 18, 2009


(I dedicate this to the ballet girls/guy and Stan & Sharon. You were my inspiration for this poem.)

The lights go dim
and the stage goes black.
The audience listens
for the first foot step.

Like a beacon at night
the first dancer sings,
with arms of emotion
flowing elegantly.

They paint the stage
with body and soul,
while gliding on air
like the first winter snow.

Passion from heaven
ripples through hearts,
by the grace of a dancer,
the purest of art.

Beautiful jewels,
who melt all with a glance.
God gave us these,
our angels to dance.
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Copyright 2009, Aaron Sullard (Niveus Nox)

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  • 14 years ago

    by ilikepurple222

    I liked reading this. very easy! i did ballet once and i loved it a lot! beautiful!! keep it up! :)

  • 14 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This poem has an amazing free flow that I envy and a heavenly theme

    Excellent is all I can say

  • 14 years ago

    by Love Panda

    I love this, when i read it i was imagining such stage, with dancing and colour from there motions..very inspirational.

  • 14 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Beautifully penned... your words painted a stage before me... with lovely ballet dancer swaying to the music... lovely write...

  • 14 years ago

    by East Poetry

    Excellent poem my friend. You definitely have the talent.

    one suggestion is all

    instead of saying

    Who melt all with a glance

    try

    Melting all with a glance.

    Taking that one syllable out for me at least helps the flow in that "very important" last stanza.

    If you'd like... for every poem of mine you read, review and rate, I will come back and do another of yours.

    keep up the great writing.

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