Very, very pretty. I love angels, just the idea of them. And I love things that remind me that they are around. Just like this poem. It was a very beautiful and flowing piece.

Beautiful jewels,
who melt all with a glance.
God gave us these,
our angels to dance

^ I really like this ending. It's pretty and it's a well-written well thought out ending. Angels are supposedly very beautiful and elegant. You did well explaining that. :)

Overall, this was a very beautiful poem. I loved the base of it and it was the perfect topic. You made angels sound beautiful because, well, they are :)

Excellent write. You are quite talented. 5/5
Take care,
Loni

Absolutely wonderful.... beautifully written, such imagery, emotion.... such a pleasure to read.

Excellent poem my friend. You definitely have the talent.

one suggestion is all

instead of saying

Who melt all with a glance

try

Melting all with a glance.

Taking that one syllable out for me at least helps the flow in that "very important" last stanza.

If you'd like... for every poem of mine you read, review and rate, I will come back and do another of yours.

keep up the great writing.

Beautifully penned... your words painted a stage before me... with lovely ballet dancer swaying to the music... lovely write...

I love this, when i read it i was imagining such stage, with dancing and colour from there motions..very inspirational.

This poem has an amazing free flow that I envy and a heavenly theme

Excellent is all I can say

I liked reading this. very easy! i did ballet once and i loved it a lot! beautiful!! keep it up! :)