by Jay Perry Jr Dec 19, 2009
category :
Love, romance /
rekindled love
Help me to believe again |
by Lady Nik
This was okay. I'd like to see you try some other styles of poetry. Maybe free verse or a haiku. I feel like your feelings are confined when you have to rhyme. Other than that I liked it. I think you did a good job with telling us how you feel. Nik |
Wow, intense love and affection, with the feeling of "wanting" mixed in there. Good write it was refreshing :) 5/5 |