Wait And See

"When i looked ahead..I saw only you..
My time has come ...Wait and see......
This is you and me ....Together at last..
Lost in our world..........Of bitter loves.
Together as one .....Stong we'll become"

My only suggestion is to capitalize your "i"s, otherwise I love the whole idea of this. I really enjoyed reading this line:

"Lost in our worl.....Of bitter loves".

"A touch so soft...This i felt..Your smile.
Let me see ....The real you....
Just like me.............."

This had the reader wanting to read more and wanting you to continue on, nice work..

"Hurt in the past.......Just like me ...
Betrayed, destroyed Left without a hope
Desire of love , pashion and life...........
Happiness too......Could this be true....
This could be me and you"

After "destroyed" place a comma and you do not need that extra space after "love".

Also, after "could this be true", shouldn't there be a question mark?

"Destroyed by love ....Partner of Abuse...
Atlast hope has arrived ..At my closed door
Was this fate for me at last...Will i see........
What true love brings.....Hope ,Happiness....
A special place ."

"What true love brings", maybe add a question mark.

And the extra space is not needed after "hope".

"Atlast" should be "At last".

A very uplifting bit right here, I am happy that hope has arrived.

"This could be you and me..."

I loved this last line standing here, it brought hope and desire to this piece...

My only other suggestion would just be to go over and clean up the grammar errors but otherwise this piece was lovely, and I wanted to read more and more.

4/5 from me, God bless you!

~MaryAnne

Merry Christmas!