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  • 14 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    "Your stories are amazeing,
    Filled with fantasy and lore.
    I'm always trying to listen,
    They make class less of a bore."

    "amazeing" should be "amazing".

    This was a good rhyming opening here,
    it made me think who you are talking about.

    "I have always sat next to you,
    From the time our class begun.
    I hope that it will stay that way,
    Untill our class is done."

    This was sweet, a wish that he will be by your side..

    "It seems to me your always happy,
    A smile there on your face.
    But I know where to push your limits,
    And when to give you space."

    A good friendship here, you know when to give each other space, and you know much about each other.

    "I didn't think we'd get along,
    But I'm glad I gave you a chance.
    I only have one more thing to say,
    Pull Up Your DA MN Pants"

    Okay, I am not much one for funny endings, more ones that leave you inspired. Otherwise, this was a good write, but I think it could be extended and elaborated, I would have loved to read more of this!

    God bless and Merry Christmas!

    ~MaryAnne