'as the ocean below bellows;'
^I think it may sound better if you flip below & bellows -- reads better to me.

'leaving me one among
the many glass statues.'
^I think one would sound better as 'alone' -- this was awkwardly worded to me.

'leaving me alone among
the many glass statues.'

To me this was a very intriguing piece, you have such an amazing imagination that no other poet can compare. Nearly perfect wording, each line so powerful. The ending is uplifting & makes the poem worth the read. Awesome job.