by Mr Rhee Dec 23, 2009
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
Look at you, sitting there, on the floor. |
by My Name Is Mouse
HOLY SHIT. that was depressing. It was a good read. For sure, I'll be checking out more of your poetry. great/fantastic job. ;) P.s could you please check out my latest poem. I'd appreciate that alot. |
I thought this was great. it was deep and i could feel and understand everything! great job! would you please read and comment on my "scars" poem?? i would love some feedback. |
by Sumit Ojha
Little long... But awesome &interesting... And full with dark feelings... Thanks for writing a greate poem on dark theme (5/5) |
I think the sharp constrast of the last stanza as compared to the gentile material seduction of the stanzas before it made the poem all the more interestingly dark |