I think the sharp constrast of the last stanza as compared to the gentile material seduction of the stanzas before it made the poem all the more interestingly dark

Little long... But awesome &interesting... And full with dark feelings... Thanks for writing a greate poem on dark theme (5/5)

I thought this was great. it was deep and i could feel and understand everything! great job! would you please read and comment on my "scars" poem?? i would love some feedback.

HOLY SHIT. that was depressing. It was a good read. For sure, I'll be checking out more of your poetry. great/fantastic job. ;) P.s could you please check out my latest poem. I'd appreciate that alot.