You've written this beautifully! I love the structure and the words you used. There's a lot of concrete detail here. You're really talented, keep up the great work :] and happy holidays!!

Wow thank you for writing this...I absolutely loved the uniqueness of this piece. Not only the way it was written but your beliefs were extremely well expressed. You are so right, no matter what happens that doesnt mean you should give up, hold on to that faith. I just absorbed every word as I read your poem, each one brought something new to the poem. Each line brought something new to the poem. You have such a gift when it comes to writing, you bring something new & original to the plate each time. I loved how you used the title & incorported a strong message & your feelings into it. Awesome awesome job.

Simply amazing