by East Poetry Dec 24, 2009
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
My dearest friend, don't be down, |
by Oceanloveisland
As you know Randy, I love to paint. I Love the images that pop up for me when I read your words. All your poems have a tone them. I enjoy your style. |
by Ole Carsten
Hi |
by L
I like the rhymes on this one too, I also the color white. You are so right, we can use our white paintbrushes too! |
by Xanthe
Perhaps my favorite poem by you. The message is just beautiful. The rhyes flowed really well. No critique at all :) |
by Mello193
Very true white canvas for black ink, white ink for black canvases, liked the metaphor of life to painting. very real. i think in a way all art comes from pain and you have transcribed this. i thought of this as maybe a higher being telling humanity the real reason for the pain. if that makes any sense. great job |