Comments : I Love You.

  • 14 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Vivid images, sounds and sights, smells tastes, expressed by your words. A unique way to describe saying I love you to someone.

  • 14 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    This was a original and creative love piece, I especially loved "peppermint kisses", the passionate images given off. This was not just one of those ordinary love poems, this was real and so expressive in all the senses.

    Thank you for sharing, God bless you and Merry Christmas!

    ~MaryAnne

  • 14 years ago

    by Lu

    Such a beautiful write. Love how you inserted "smell, taste, touch" into this piece.

    Beautifully penned verses, wonderful read!

  • 14 years ago

    by Corinne

    A very lovely poem.

  • 14 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Liked the descriptions of love, you made love
    smell so sweet and wanting! An enjoyable
    read :)

  • 14 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    Aww... wow! this poem beautifully expresses how people show their love... physically lol! Great job!

  • 14 years ago

    by Laurenf7

    5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Ingrid

    This poem was pure magic, Temps.
    To be with the one you love, especially in the early days of the relationship, when all is new is the biggest thrill that can capture your heart and mind. The beauty of it all, is that this feeling is ageless and timeless and can be found anew, when you have the courage to open up your heart anew, either to the one that was already yours or a new love.
    We should never lose courage when it comes to love, ha ha..your screen name is so good;)

    God bless,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 14 years ago

    by Fran

    Such creative use of imagery, 'crystal diamonds fall vivaciously' sums up the wonderful feeling of love so eloquently. Well written.