I dont think Ive read something like this format from you in a long time, maybe never but I must say I thorougly enjoyed everything about it. I could not believe how well you sucked me into this poem, how interesting you made it. What a captivating piece, after reading all these regrets in your words I felt like there would be no light at the end but there actually is and it brings a smile to the readers face & makes them think heavily about life in general. What an effective write, I have really enjoyed reading your poems today. |