by Jundy Dynamyte Dec 25, 2009
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
A poker game starts. |
by Jad
An interesting metaphor you have used to describe the way you love someone but I guess that makes it unique and not so cliched. The flow was off in places but thats due to the way in which you wrote this poem(freestyle). Anyway it was a great job and keep writing. |