by The Queen Dec 25, 2009
category :
Dark, fantasy /
other
A snake-bitten voile swirls |
At times the vocabulary was complex which can in turn disrupt one's ability to comprehend what youre saying but for the most part I thought you both wrote this very well. I peronsally would tone down the vocabulary a little because even some words I wasn't sure of the meaning. Anyways, nicely done. |