This is a reallly good poem! I reallly really like it! im gonna put you as one of my favorite writers!!

You should coment my 3 most recent poems!
I would appriciate itt!

5/5 :))
--jesss.

Very moving. You've described the constant questions floating around in anyone's head when their relationship is... failing.

Voted 5/5, and you're now one of my favorites :)

Guys suck! They are so stupid and we never understand why. Haha guys really are from a different planet!

I really loved this poem. It was something all us girls could relate to. Also, it showed anger. When you know you have a good poem, is when you get your emotion out to the reader clearly. You are upset, angry, and quite frankly pissed. Ha, I like it.

Again, there were some spots here and there that the flow was a tad off...but overall, it was a great and unique poem that is something to give the reader to think about and enjoy.

I love the whole "I hate you, I pinky promise I do."

That was cute. Haha it was somewhat a comedic relief through all the tears and sadness.

Again, very lovely poem. I'm very fond of it and I hope you continue to write!

5/5