Our Love

by Michelle   Jun 16, 2004


Stronger than the noontime rays of the sun
Wider than the horizon I can't fully see
More nourishing than the raindrops on a thirsting rose
Your love has been to me.
Lifting me higher than the tallest mountain peak
Deeper inside me still than the ocean blue
Ravaging me like the strongest hurricane
The love I feel for you.
A sudden avalanche of emotion crashed upon me
Mired in the quicksand pulling me under
I need you more now than the air I breathe
Our love will never be torn asunder.

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  • 21 years ago

    by Ş∂ņďħy∂

    Lovely piece of work! Why i didn't see your works before! ***** :)

  • 21 years ago

    by Rachel

    Michelle,
    Sorry that I havn't commented on any of your poems for awhile but... this one is definately a 5! I seem to just not get enough of your work. I love the way that you describe your love for Craig you seem to express your feelings so well whenever you write about him and I think that is why your poems turn out to be so good and well-written. Thank you for sharing your feelings with us because we really enjoy reading all of your work... let me tell ya that you are one talented writer! So keep up the good work...I luvd this one. Take care and dream big!
    Love always,
    ~Rachel~

  • 21 years ago

    by TaTy

    loved it... but then again i love all your poems.. =) 5 all the way

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