Comments : Hold My Heart

  • 14 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Omg I just adored this. The last line was very powerful, I can so relate with that at this current time. Standing atop a telephone pole reaching for that person's arms, dandelion clouds. Wow youre on a roll with your poetry lately & this was no exception (: I'm in love with this piece!

  • 14 years ago

    by Clown

    My question is this, is this poem within relation to a person, or God? I feel a very religious vibe coming from this poem. Its very powerful and I absolutly love it, keep up the amazing work

  • 13 years ago

    by pookiengurgi

    Beautiful.....pulls me toward the idea of submitting to the religion......though I also worry if you're subconciously suicidal