MaryAnne,

This takes me back so many years, to the time when I was a teenager myself...like you, I was a romantic as well and it is so nice to see that romance is still alive!

The images you made me see were so innocent and pure and well..really lovely:)

I imagine you and I
dancing in blushing skies
hopeful comets laughing
as they fall right on by.
Tangerine clouds roll past
inviting us to seek above
we hold hands and ride
through the tunnel of our love.

^^
All your poems make perfect sense, not just some pretty words thrown together to impress, but very mature writing, that reveals the mind of a young, intelligent woman:)