Tantalized Patience.

by Courageous Dreamer   Dec 28, 2009


Discombobulated emotions
-tantalize patience-
with deafening vexation,
compressing foresight.

hypnotic lips of silk
-in sync with mine-
only a lingering dream
in frolic with reality.

lovely temptation
-dances at my fingertips-
like a vivacious barracuda,
unreachable.

allurement transforms into
-a paper promenade-
to brutal loneliness,
where I yearn for your silk lips

-to be in sync with mine-

For a challenge to use the words: discombobulated, deafening, foresight, hypnotic, silk, frolic, lovely, barracuda, paper, & brutal.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Lu

    Wow you have done an excellent job on this piece from that list of words.
    I couldn't even begin to imagine how I would put them all into one piece.

    lovely temptation
    -dances at my fingertips-
    like a vivacious barracuda,
    unreachable.
    ^^^
    Loved this part !

    Excellent read, very unique I must say

  • 14 years ago

    by ilikepurple222

    Nice job with the challenge! i really liked the tone as well. keep it up and don't ever stop writing! :) wanna read my "scars" and "change" poems?

  • 14 years ago

    by KemistryKia

    LOVED IT

  • 14 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Well done with the challenge. It really pulls
    the reader into a world of sadness..good
    write :)

  • 14 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    You did an excellent job on the challenge... so beautifully you have used the words... it didnt felt like a deliberate attempt to use them... smooth flow and rhyme...
    loved the imagery...
    wonderfully penned :)

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