Well done and I would say you met the challenge. Sadness drips from the words you have written.

Good work with this challenge, I loved the hints of sadness written all over and you wove some potent words. Best of luck to you.

God bless and Happy New Year!

~MaryAnne

Well done Temps..very smartly written..Loved the combinations of some really excellent words...I thought it would be a boring piece considering that you have to just insert those challenge words but I was wrong..it turned out totally amazing..excellent piece really..

You did an excellent job on the challenge... so beautifully you have used the words... it didnt felt like a deliberate attempt to use them... smooth flow and rhyme...
loved the imagery...
wonderfully penned :)

Well done with the challenge. It really pulls
the reader into a world of sadness..good
write :)

LOVED IT

Nice job with the challenge! i really liked the tone as well. keep it up and don't ever stop writing! :) wanna read my "scars" and "change" poems?

Wow you have done an excellent job on this piece from that list of words.
I couldn't even begin to imagine how I would put them all into one piece.

lovely temptation
-dances at my fingertips-
like a vivacious barracuda,
unreachable.
^^^
Loved this part !

Excellent read, very unique I must say