by Second to None Dec 29, 2009
category :
Friendship, family /
best friends
**I wrote this poem for one of my best friends in the entire world. He is one of the best friends anyone could ever ask for. He won't let me down. Max, remember Rawr means iloveyou in dinosaur. :)** |
Um i thought this was a very interesting poem. I can really feel how close you are to this person and im sure we all have a friend like this that that we are close to. But i thought it flowed well in some places but it was really off in alot of places. Also i thought that most of the rhyming seemed forced. Also you reused alot of words which made for some really off repition. I still loved the overall thought of the poem and the real friendship that was portrayed throughtout it |