Um i thought this was a very interesting poem. I can really feel how close you are to this person and im sure we all have a friend like this that that we are close to. But i thought it flowed well in some places but it was really off in alot of places. Also i thought that most of the rhyming seemed forced. Also you reused alot of words which made for some really off repition. I still loved the overall thought of the poem and the real friendship that was portrayed throughtout it