Your choice of words is astounding. This if by far one of my favorite poems. I enjoyed every stanza, every line, but these are the ones that stood out the greatest for me:

"Dark, dripping,
Like murky depths of lies,
The rocky bottom of truth,"

To me, these lines reflect reality. The truth isn't always what it seems - but these lines run deep, that even saying that puts me on shaky grounds.

Other lines that stood out:

"Goddess,
Cease the moment,
Not the day,"

"Acid rain cant melt my hate away"

You've written a beautiful, dark piece. I'm glad you shared this with us. :)

Like i said befor i don,t get the dark poems
but i just want to read everything your write
you just have a hell of a way of putting things togther