Good Orderly Direction

by Michael D Nalley   Dec 29, 2009


We have looked at life from probabilities
Though we adapt to endless possibilities

In the process of our simple dissection
Is the chance for Good Orderly Direction.

Everything from the rhythm of the heart
Must be an answer for such a humble start

Some look forward, while some reverse
The great order in the whole universe

In the harmony do we all assume
That eternity leads only to doom?

May Good Orderly Direction be our salvation
To protect the hungry from spiritual starvation

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  • 14 years ago

    by KJ

    In the harmony do we all assume
    That eternity leads only to doom?

    ^^so true.

    I love the fact that all your poetry is so in depth. You did a great job with the format and rhyme scheme. All your writes are a pleasure to read.

    5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Mello193

    Very good, id consider making this longer, good structuer everthing has good flow and wasnt hard to follow at all, id get rid of the slash marks though, it doesnt make it look too pleasing to the eyes.

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