Very well done. In this line, still tears through me, I don't think you need the s on tears. It is good when you reach this point in a relationship that is over and realize that you can do better. You should never feel the emotions you expressed when you love someone and they love you. Overall it is well written. Good job.

To be completely honest, I didnt like the falling thing, its not necessairly very overused or anything written like that but just didnt like it. Sorry for being blunt. Anyways, aside from that a wonderful write. Simply written but well expressed. Shows that you know when a relationship really isnt going in the right direction that maybe you should move on. Good job.

Great write. I dont really have much to say other than this poem was wonderfully written. Although:

I wish I could to be

^^Im not sure if it's just how Im reading, but I think that you should just do away with the word 'to' It sounds much better without it and Im not sure if you meant to put it there. Just a suggestion though.

Overall, I enjoyed this poem. 5/5

--Kay Jay

This has to be one of the best poems I've read.. It touched something inside of me, and had me gripped throughout. I love the way you wrote

"F
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Worked sooo well. Loved the flow and meaning. Was beautiful!! 5/5

Woh.... this just blew me away Nik. Loved it! I loved your unusual style, and the "Falling " bit written that way... like the letters are falling...Lol. Cool :)) Also the title... "Paper Heart" and how the persons name was written in pencil that you can erase... and not let remain forever :) Great piece. Very well done Nik!

I loved this. Sometimes, it's better to let go than hang on. This poem is really about nipping it in the bud and saying enough is enough. 5/5

The true story of a teenage love affair. lol. this piece was very well written and i loved the way you delivered the whole thing. especially the falling part. 5/5