by Poet on the Piano Dec 30, 2009
category :
Nature, environment /
nature
Promising sunlight streams joyfully in |
by Lonely Rider
Lovely... very beautiful imagery... |
Remove 'in' after joyfully in the first line, I think you can do without it. |
This sounds delightful :) i loved the imagery!! great job! please read my "change" poem?? |