Tear Me Apart.

by Hologram   Dec 31, 2009


I feel like I'm being torn,
Ripped apart from the seams,
Just cracked in half,
Broken like all those dreams.

The duct tape isn't holding,
And the glue is coming undone,
My laces have all come loose,
And I'll trip if I try to run.

The words never had such effect
Not until they left your lips
I've never felt so numb
As I run the razor along my hips

I've been sliced open
With my heart cut out of my chest
Just sew me up and lay me down
Six feet under to forever rest.

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  • 14 years ago

    by FindingHarmonyInYurCries

    Beautifully Written My Dear,
    However _ There is no f'in way that ii will ever be around to see you laid 6feet under.

    Ily.
    xxx

  • 14 years ago

    by XxLastHopexX

    So very sad...well written...I can relate.

  • 14 years ago

    by Still Slightly Broken

    "The duct tape isn't holding,
    And the glue is coming undone,
    My laces have all come loose,
    And I'll trip if I try to run."

    -Yet another fabulous write from you! I especially liked the imagery in this stanza, I could picture it really well.
    Well done :)

  • 14 years ago

    by ilikepurple222

    Sad, but understandable. i liked it. a lot. :) please read "scars" and "change"? my new ones i wrote this week.

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