Comments : Tear Me Apart.

  • 14 years ago

    by ilikepurple222

    Sad, but understandable. i liked it. a lot. :) please read "scars" and "change"? my new ones i wrote this week.

  • 14 years ago

    by Still Slightly Broken

    "The duct tape isn't holding,
    And the glue is coming undone,
    My laces have all come loose,
    And I'll trip if I try to run."

    -Yet another fabulous write from you! I especially liked the imagery in this stanza, I could picture it really well.
    Well done :)

  • 14 years ago

    by XxLastHopexX

    So very sad...well written...I can relate.

  • 14 years ago

    by FindingHarmonyInYurCries

    Beautifully Written My Dear,
    However _ There is no f'in way that ii will ever be around to see you laid 6feet under.

    Ily.
    xxx