Comments : Dance Of A Butterfly

  • 14 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Oh my gosh! This poem totally made me chuckle! Because here you described a butterfly enjoy the stares of onlookers and enjoying the attention and it reminded me of a few people I know. This could easily describe people too, but you contorted it into the life of a butterfly. incredible!

    Embracing glances bestowed upon
    before strutting, looking proud.
    ^^^
    That was just amazing..simply because I love the word bestowed lol

    Awesome write!

  • 14 years ago

    by Tom Swart

    I agree this is a good work and a pleasant read. I really liked the simple nature of it and the way it flowed all around me. I think you have a nice style and hope to see more. Bravo