by Chelsey
Oh my gosh! This poem totally made me chuckle! Because here you described a butterfly enjoy the stares of onlookers and enjoying the attention and it reminded me of a few people I know. This could easily describe people too, but you contorted it into the life of a butterfly. incredible! |
by Tom Swart
I agree this is a good work and a pleasant read. I really liked the simple nature of it and the way it flowed all around me. I think you have a nice style and hope to see more. Bravo |