I went to go copy my favorite stanza but then realized I might as well just copy the entire poem... haha I loved every stanza, every line, every word. Such beauty in your words... & showed true love. 'Sweet promises of -never let go- soar' --- loved this a lot. A beautiful write!

I like your use of creative metaphors and I liked this part expecially:
Lively ocean waves
embrace remote sand
bestowing mermaid kisses
on every single grain

Mermaid kisses wow! Definitely brought me back to my childhood fantasies. Was a delightful read, 5/5!