Dying Love

by She Loves Me She Loves Me Not   Dec 31, 2009


My heart crumbles, slowly decays,
I used to love you in so many ways,
Everything used to feel so right,
Now all we do is argue and fight.

You've hurt me and I've hurt you,
Nothing left to say or do,
Please just let me end this here,
It is for the best, I'm being sincere,

You have changed a lot,
and let our relationship rot,
You're not the one I fell for,
I just don't love you anymore.

Please don't argue, and say that I'm wrong,
You have to move on, and learn to be strong,
We've tried and tried to mend what we had,
But sometimes things are already too bad.

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  • 12 years ago

    by BlueJay

    Wow, I really, really like this piece. It is very well written as far as emotion is considered. I mean sure the word choice is immaculate and your voice is clear. The flow is well done, but no the emotion in such a short piece and its this strong? Wow. Excellent poem, though it does suck that so many people experience so many things similar to what you describe in the piece. Fantastic job.

    5/5

    ~MRK

  • 14 years ago

    by Fran

    Unfortunately even great relationships fade altogether or change into something else. A strong poem that charts the decay of something once good.

  • 14 years ago

    by KJ

    Very good write. You did a fantastic job with the rhyme/format of this poem.

    You've hurt me, I've hurt you,

    ^^Maybe 'You've hurt me and I've hurt you,' would make the flow better in this stanza. Just a suggestion though.

    Overall 5/5

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