Very good write. You did a fantastic job with the rhyme/format of this poem.

You've hurt me, I've hurt you,

^^Maybe 'You've hurt me and I've hurt you,' would make the flow better in this stanza. Just a suggestion though.

Overall 5/5

Unfortunately even great relationships fade altogether or change into something else. A strong poem that charts the decay of something once good.

Wow, I really, really like this piece. It is very well written as far as emotion is considered. I mean sure the word choice is immaculate and your voice is clear. The flow is well done, but no the emotion in such a short piece and its this strong? Wow. Excellent poem, though it does suck that so many people experience so many things similar to what you describe in the piece. Fantastic job.

5/5

~MRK