I love how the whole poem is dialogue! i have a poem with almost the same story except instead of witnessing the hug it was in a picture so it was only her side of the story. reading this i felt like i was watching around a corner as my best friend was having this convo. very vivid emotions. i'm glad you stumbled upon my page. you're a good writer! favoriting you as well lol

Wow, i seriously loved this :]
Skimmed through a few of your others, and i like came back to this one twice. i like that's it's so real and feels like a story, like i'm looking on this scene that's sort of private, that i shouldn't be seeing. and i like how it's sort of sloppy, no order just something i really relate to, feeling like you're so frustrated and so lost and so honestly in love with someone, so jealous :] haha
it's really nice, but i do have a question. when she says that she loves him more than her own life, he doesn't say it back. he says, "i know exactly what thats like". why doesn't he say it back?! lol i'm just a total hopeless romantic and i love a beautiful story and i couldn't stop thinking about that. idk am i reading too much into it? w/b por favor
-MattyJane <3 :]