Come Crashing Down

"I've had my fair share of
rainbows with colors galore
so many broken pots of
gold, I don't want anymore.
Enough stars in my closet
to keep it lit for years.
Done too much planet surfing
I'm better off here"

Okay I've got to say this is one of the BEST stanzas in poetry that I have ever laid my eyes on. I just... I mean wow. It's so descriptive and appealing. I mean I can really picture it and it's such a nice thing to picture. A great love poem if you ask me.

overall I loved the entire thing but that one stanza just really did it for me. :) 5/5!

I'm glad you've realized you don't need somebody who is absolutely perfect in order to love them and be happy. I believe most people throw away their happiness because they think there is so much better out their for them. Thats not always the case... Great job as always very good imagery and flow 5/5

Excellent poem!!

Very well written, i really dont have the words to uplift the beauty of this poem.
bravo ^^,

Ah, you had to talk about comets, but this is clearly not about them :-) Excellent piece, Lady Nik