Wow Chels, from the way you wrote this, i can tell that you have like this guy for quite sometime. It must have been like a dream come true when all your dreams turns to reality.Protesting yourself from sleeping, not wanting this beautiful moment to be just a dream. I also like the how you word it in away how girls would express their love for a guy in their diary. I truly enjoy reading this poem. Excellent Job, Keep it up;)

Reading this piece kept a smile on my face, in fact it didn't leave even after I've finished reading it! It was a pure delight to read something this convival and happy (:

He kissed me; I kissed him; that describes the word delight
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I loved ths part! Gosh, you sure could make people feel the ectasy you were feeling then. Well done! XD

Absolutely loved it! described exactly how i felt when i was in the arms of the guy i love.
im glad youre feeling that way :)

Wow beautiful poem, beautiful ending.

I've always written about my feelings toward others, but never have I had something in return. How I wish someone would write something like this about me. Lucky guy.

Wow.. I really like this poem :) its so romance like but at the same time very cute :D

Wow this is yet again amazing. i have tried many times to write a happy poem & everytime it sounds cheezy to me lol be greatful you can go in different directions! I think this is why i havent been writing lately, cuz im sooo happy & i cant write my feelings down...Keep it up!

Okay, I absolutley l o v e d every part of this poem. So much feeling in every line, I kept wanting to read more. E x c e l l e n t job. Please keep it up.(: 5/5

Perfectt((: describes how iufeel aboutt my husband now ithinkk it's awh 2 gewd 2 bee truee but it's reall 5/5 :D

Very good, lots of feelings

Very cute :)
It describes exactly the way i am when im with my boyfriend.
It seems to be a dream,
But supposibly its reality.

Loved it!!!!!