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Stare around your window pane, boarded, thrashed, blocking rain / Wonder why these trees don't talk, then ask your shoes to take a walk" i don't know why i love these lines so much, i guess it's the imagery maybe. the flow was very good. all of the lines, as random as they were, all tied together somehow. and i also love "A circle has no end at all." great poem! |
by steve
That is a deep and insightful poem! You made it flow very well. This poem can stir up several different emotions in one reading. "When nothing seems to fit in place it's only wise to think of space |
by Cale
Great write!!! The emotion and flow was amazing and very insightful!!! You have great talent!! 5/5! |
by Wicked Ways
Wow nicely written..very nicely I absolutely love the flow of this...and it content snd concept...you penned this well....your wordplay is fantasic...nice choice of words ..I can tell you put a lot of heart and thought into this poem |
by Lost One
A circle has no end at all. |