I like the fervent belief of how the day will turn out all good for you as illustrated in this poem.
I especially loved this part:
and at the end of the
day the dawn will take
away my pain
^ ^ ^
Dawn will take away my pain... it paints a pretty picture in my mind (: 5/5!

Wow, this is perfect and inspirational. Alot more people should think like this but I admit it can't be easy. 5/5, Em

It's really one of the best peoms i've ever read . I like where u take me after i imagine every single word . I totaly agree with emma , it's not easy at all for everyone to think in this way , i congratulate u .
wonderful job 5/5

Amazing! and it made me happy that you had such a day and I hope many more.

I really like this poem, I'm not sure but it gives me hope, when I wake up and see the bright days of my life, even though others are dark. Thanks for that. :)

welldone, nice writing.

What a day