Comments : Moved On

  • 14 years ago

    by Biya

    Your memory's nearly gone,
    It seems like I can see clearly,
    Now that I've moved on!

    Does love end? I don't think so ..but as u r hurt and the subject and the ending of poem are really perfect.. It says when someone is hurt then the person can also leave his love but its really difficult to bear the situation.

    Lovely
    Peace
    5/5
    biya

  • 14 years ago

    by rahul

    I so loved it.....
    that rillli describes my condition too....so so well written...

    gud work...
    god bless