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by Poetically understood Jan 4, 2010 category : Miscellaneous / Misc. poems
There are many different tactics That you take to reach your dreams, But to leap high and jump far Is harder than it seems. To take a long run down that path And see your goal ahead, It fillls you with adrenaline That keeps your dreams well fed. That final step you push off hard To soar into the sky, There's not a better emotion Than to feel like you can fly. And as you suspend in the air You're thinking just jump far, Because you know you are the best You have to set the bar!
by KJ
It feels you with adrenaline ^^ 'feels' should be 'fills' Overall, another great write. You are quite talented and you should write more :) You have a gift when it comes to rhyme. 5/5