I'm Dating Myself

by Poetically understood   Jan 4, 2010


I'm dating myself,
I've realized it's true,
He's never around,
What should I do?

He's gone so long,
I forget his face,
But then he returns,
Before he's fully erased.

I once even thought,
That it's possibly me,
I ruled it out when,
I found I was the we.

I guess that I'm not,
As important as wealth,
That theory's what remains,
Because I'm dating myself!

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  • 14 years ago

    by KJ

    Great write. Even though it was short and simple, it said so much. You did a wonderful job with the rhyme. But I do have one suggestion:

    He's gone so long,
    I start to forget his face,
    But then he returns,
    Before he's fully erased

    ^^ I would do away with 'start to' in the second line. I just believe that the flow would be better that way.

    Overall, amazing job.
    5/5

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