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by KJ
Great write. Even though it was short and simple, it said so much. You did a wonderful job with the rhyme. But I do have one suggestion: He's gone so long, I start to forget his face, But then he returns, Before he's fully erased ^^ I would do away with 'start to' in the second line. I just believe that the flow would be better that way. Overall, amazing job. 5/5