I know that playground been there a few times, you will visit it again and again but one day you will find the right one to play in and then it will be the magical playground. Heartfelt write Chelz

This was great! i liked it a lot! especially since i've been going through a hard time myself. devils playground. awesome title!

A lot can relate to this write. Good job with the rhyme; although I think that the second stanza could have been worded differently. But overall, beautifully/wonderfully written. There isn't much more that I can say other than you have a gift with writing poetry. Keep up the great writes. 5/5

Very good message it's something a lot of people can relate too so it has a great target audience. I really like the structure how you state a theme or emotion at the beginning and then break down into it, I use it often and it makes something special. The rhyming is spot on except the wrong belonged is a little bit of a stretch :P. The flow is excellent. Great write!