Olwin, you have captured the essence of love. Well done.

Olwin
What a tender sweet poem. I can see the big smile on your face. Funny how love can just light up a dark room.
Good job!
Love Cindy

Well certainly Love is a feeling that you can only feel from your heart. I like how you use the spark & the candle as a metaphor for how u feel. Well I guess, only when it comes, you'll know. Nice ending. Great job;)

WOW, very true and a lovely write. 5/5, Em

Very very true. The end :]

There's no mistaking true love when it knocks
:o)
excellent thoughts

Aww... Beautiful! I love how its short and simple, yet so meaningful! Everyone can relate to this wonderful feeling! Well done! :)

Enjoyable Little Write Olwin!!!