Faded memories.

by nmdoza   Jan 6, 2010


Memories, memories, flow through my head.
Unforgotten memories that dwell in my head.
They are the only things that last forever.
Life keeps changing , but my feelings wont ever.
At night I dream the same dream on my bed.
The things I wish to remain has just begun to misled.
The past stays within me , and so I wish to flee,
Without realizing my escape does not free,
Myself from all the things that cannot be.
What life has to offer, I cannot believe.
Growth and acceptance I must achieve.
And during my journey I hope to see,
A life worth the change that changes me.
Faded memories try so hard to make our old lives a reality.
But somehow I've figured that is no longer a possibility.
The past must not linger, even if memories last forever.
Because faded memories try so hard.

-nmdoza.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Kuro

    Ah memories, they can be our worst nightmares or our most precious treasure. its how you view it and your outlook that effects how you see them.
    nice poem
    ~Ben

  • 14 years ago

    by nmdoza

    Thank you. I'll try to keep that in mind when writing my poems next time.

  • 14 years ago

    by xLeftxBehindx

    Again very good write! I really can relate to what you said about the past and all.

    Your rhyme was alright except in the very beginning with "head and head" at the end of both lines. Then towards the end the rhyming dissappeared by first rhyming each ending the same way, and then by end there wasnt any rhyming at all.
    But Amazing poem!

  • 14 years ago

    by eezebard

    Past memories are good to have, a long as they don't hinder our future
    :o)
    enjoyed

  • 14 years ago

    by Em

    Wow, this is very inspirational. I like your style, 5/5. Em

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