by Tammi Jan 7, 2010
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
I know you have been broken many times |
The sadness seeps through every word. I really like the word choice you have used it truly composes a visual diagram of the experiences and emotions that come from within. |
by Chevalier des Fleurs
Such a sad poem, it is touching in the aspect of everyone well most everyone has felt this way. I know I sure have! You really put together a beautiful and personal write about how a heart feels when going through the waves of love. Nicely done! |
This was both incredibly sad and very relatable to. i feel your pain. i love the fact that you wrote this to yourself. (your heart) it makes it so amazingly personal. great job! |