This was both incredibly sad and very relatable to. i feel your pain. i love the fact that you wrote this to yourself. (your heart) it makes it so amazingly personal. great job!

Such a sad poem, it is touching in the aspect of everyone well most everyone has felt this way. I know I sure have! You really put together a beautiful and personal write about how a heart feels when going through the waves of love. Nicely done!
5/5

The sadness seeps through every word. I really like the word choice you have used it truly composes a visual diagram of the experiences and emotions that come from within.
5.5 from me